Structure and Outline

This will be the master outline and structure document. Lets go a four act structure.

  1. Gruesome intro with POV nurse and Hannah on the operating table setting the scene for Asylum
  2. Annetta comes to the Asylum
  3. Meeting the patients is bewilderingly strange but Freidrick appears kindly and knowledgeable
  4. First meeting with Kim and the flicker of attraction
  5. Kim warns of occult  goings on, this frightens us away. He's weird.
  6. Stumble onto Freidrick and Aboudja working evil magic on Hannah. She shrieks in terror as a nasty sprite is attached.
  7. Turn to flee but captured by the imposing bulk of Torr [First Act turning point]
  8. Come to chained in dungeon
  9. Freidrick enters and tells us of his experiments, his large body of work that will imortalise him once he has gone.
  10. Torr feeds Annetta and glows a little with the thanks
  11. POV nurse drags  Annetta into operating room. Scene 1 repeats in shot with Annetta on the table.
  12. Come to chained in dungeon. Abdouja visits and points and prods his next victim.
  13. Torr brings food. Annetta shrieks at the site of the hideous sprite attached to Torr.
  14. Torr forgets to lock door as he leaves in confusion. Annetta manages to drag hands from chains, but not without scratching and bloodying her hands.
  15. As we move through the labyrinths we see the hideousness that the sprites cause.
  16. A call by Freidrick over the intercom tells nurses to search for Annetta as she has has a psychotic break and is  a danger to herself and to others.
  17. Annetta finds her way to the normal wards above ground.
  18. Kim bumps into Annetta and draws her to safety as Torr lumbers past.
  19. Kim talks to calm Annetta down from her mania. Her feelings grow for Kim a little.
  20. Freidrick walks in. Kim has betrayed her by enabling the rooms intercom. He tells her it is in her best interest. [False Goal Act II]
  21. Back to the dungeon.
  22. Freidrick and Abdouja begin their evil magic to attach a frightening creature to Annetta. Torr looks on.
  23. Torr finally surcomes to torment and guilt deciding to rescue Annetta. Jealousy that Abdouja takes Freidrick's attention also boils his blood. He crushes Abdouja as would a boa constrictor.
  24. Annetta takes her chance at escape.
  25. More patients and their scary sprites
  26. She sees Kim considers calling for his help, but realises that he is practicing his own occult spell. Hannah is squealing on the table. Annetta runs off even more distraught.
  27. Kim is in fact performing an exocism and banishes the sprite. Hannah is effectively cured - though can still see sprites.
  28. Annetta caught by the POV nurse.
  29. Freidrick explains he can do the spells himself anyway. In fact he can make them bigger and better
  30. Annetta has the mother of all sprites attached to her.
  31. Kim and Hannah come across a moppy Torr. They find out Annetta's predicament and rush to help.

Not sure quite what goes her yet, but in the end:
  1. Freidrick's lifes work to go up in smoke. He freaks out. Dies gruesomly fighting Annetta.
  2. Kim manages a spell that sends all the sprites to oblivion.
This is vaguely looking like a page by page summary. Sort of works. There is a fourth act remaining, and some relationship threads to sew in yet. That should make 90+ pages.

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