Structure and Outline
This will be the master outline and structure document. Lets go a four act structure.
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- Gruesome intro with POV nurse and Hannah on the operating table setting the scene for Asylum
- Annetta comes to the Asylum
- Meeting the patients is bewilderingly strange but Freidrick appears kindly and knowledgeable
- First meeting with Kim and the flicker of attraction
- Kim warns of occult goings on, this frightens us away. He's weird.
- Stumble onto Freidrick and Aboudja working evil magic on Hannah. She shrieks in terror as a nasty sprite is attached.
- Turn to flee but captured by the imposing bulk of Torr [First Act turning point]
- Come to chained in dungeon
- Freidrick enters and tells us of his experiments, his large body of work that will imortalise him once he has gone.
- Torr feeds Annetta and glows a little with the thanks
- POV nurse drags Annetta into operating room. Scene 1 repeats in shot with Annetta on the table.
- Come to chained in dungeon. Abdouja visits and points and prods his next victim.
- Torr brings food. Annetta shrieks at the site of the hideous sprite attached to Torr.
- Torr forgets to lock door as he leaves in confusion. Annetta manages to drag hands from chains, but not without scratching and bloodying her hands.
- As we move through the labyrinths we see the hideousness that the sprites cause.
- A call by Freidrick over the intercom tells nurses to search for Annetta as she has has a psychotic break and is a danger to herself and to others.
- Annetta finds her way to the normal wards above ground.
- Kim bumps into Annetta and draws her to safety as Torr lumbers past.
- Kim talks to calm Annetta down from her mania. Her feelings grow for Kim a little.
- Freidrick walks in. Kim has betrayed her by enabling the rooms intercom. He tells her it is in her best interest. [False Goal Act II]
- Back to the dungeon.
- Freidrick and Abdouja begin their evil magic to attach a frightening creature to Annetta. Torr looks on.
- Torr finally surcomes to torment and guilt deciding to rescue Annetta. Jealousy that Abdouja takes Freidrick's attention also boils his blood. He crushes Abdouja as would a boa constrictor.
- Annetta takes her chance at escape.
- More patients and their scary sprites
- She sees Kim considers calling for his help, but realises that he is practicing his own occult spell. Hannah is squealing on the table. Annetta runs off even more distraught.
- Kim is in fact performing an exocism and banishes the sprite. Hannah is effectively cured - though can still see sprites.
- Annetta caught by the POV nurse.
- Freidrick explains he can do the spells himself anyway. In fact he can make them bigger and better
- Annetta has the mother of all sprites attached to her.
- Kim and Hannah come across a moppy Torr. They find out Annetta's predicament and rush to help.
- Freidrick's lifes work to go up in smoke. He freaks out. Dies gruesomly fighting Annetta.
- Kim manages a spell that sends all the sprites to oblivion.
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