Characters
This will be the up-to-date summary of characters. The invention and exploration of character will still happen in the blog entries proper, but I obviously need one account of the truth somewhere.
How much have the characters changed already!
ANNETTA ROSEN - Protagonist
FRIEDRICK KERCHNER - Primary Antagonist - Action Line
KIM LAUTENS - Primary Antagonist - Relationship Line
Sister?
Nurse in credits? - always in scary POV?
Other patients?
So then, characters are now beginning to take shape. They also seem to be falling into a semblance of a plot inside my brain. Next step is for a master outline to maintain and develop.
Not 100% sure that a blog is the right tool for this, but it is the concept of commentary and feedback that I hope will make it all worthwhile.
How much have the characters changed already!
ANNETTA ROSEN - Protagonist
- Not the new head doctor now. Some more development required to get the best from the antagonists.
FRIEDRICK KERCHNER - Primary Antagonist - Action Line
KIM LAUTENS - Primary Antagonist - Relationship Line
- Young Priest
- Discovery of the supernatural has him obsessed with the occult. Moral clashes with his religion.
- Smitten with Annetta. His attempts to help her drive her away as she initially thinks he is mad.
- She almost comes around but seeing him casting spells she believes he is responsible for the horrors.
- He is in fact helping and finally saves the day.
- Is a patient
- Torr is Freidrick's right hand man (his POV)
- Driven by raw emotion he could turn
- A Haitian Priest who is in as a patient
- Assists Freidrick in attaching Sprites and generally being spooky.
- Poor relationship with Torr.
Sister?
Nurse in credits? - always in scary POV?
Other patients?
So then, characters are now beginning to take shape. They also seem to be falling into a semblance of a plot inside my brain. Next step is for a master outline to maintain and develop.
Not 100% sure that a blog is the right tool for this, but it is the concept of commentary and feedback that I hope will make it all worthwhile.

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